Peer Review #2

 PEER REVIEW #2

Week 8 Reading Task

-- The first blog post I was assigned is Megan's post about media ethics below is the link to the original blog post by Megan.

Media Ethics (darjasidmblog.blogspot.com) 

After reviewing and giving feedback to Darja's blog I learned using the SPARK method

Firstly I looked at the specific details which Darja was giving in her blog then I tried to find out the information that she left out and tried to give her feedback on that and say you could've done this instead of another thing. So when Darja reads back over my feedback she will know for the next blog post she will be able to improve i=even more from the last time. Peer feedback is all about just helping your peers to improve from the point there at now. I could've even referenced where I found the information to improve on her blog post but I did not but that is also something that could help theme even more

-- The second blog post i gave peer feedback on was Megan's Blog post about Actively Reading. Below is the link to the original post

Active Reading (megansidmblog.blogspot.com)

After Reading and learning about the SPARK method I started reviewing and giving feedback to Megan's blog 

the SPARK Method actually really help me solidify what I was going to say in my peer review. Firstly i read through the post once then read through it again to try and pick out the details i missed in the first read. I didn't seem to notice any spelling or punctuation mistakes in the blog post which was a plus. Then I went on to see if any of my knowledge could help improve the piece of work. I couldn't find much more information needed to improve the piece so there was not much i had to say in the part where i give a solution to the problem. 

SO overall my experience with the peer feedback this week was interesting because i got two complete different blog posts and they were both a joy to read



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