Rewrite Blog Post Experience

 Rewrite Experience

After reviewing the comments left on my post and rewriting the post based off the ideas and feedback my peers left for me I know have more of and idea on how to improve my writing for the future and progress in knowing more about what I'm writing about. it also gave me more time to do more research on media ethics since there wasn't much I had to change about the post I just got a better grasp on what I was fully researching and writing about.

I also got to make it for informative especially explain what and where the medium is the message came from. So I went into more detail after the first paragraph as one of my peers recommended which helped the overall enjoyment of the blog.

So the overall experience I had rewriting my last blog post was a positive one I believe but obviously my future blog posts will be greatly improved know since I've had some feedback on one of my posts. It will take time for me to get my style of writing down and be able to properly research the topic I'm writing about but hopefully my next blog posts will be greatly improved on. 

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