Final Rewrite experience

 Rewrite Experience

After having my 1 to 1 session with Irene and having my feedback on my blog post I now have a full understanding of where to go and how to improve on my blog posts in the future it was a good help having the 1 to 1 and the personal feedback just to see where I am in my work and where I should be heading to pass or do well in this specific module 

Upon going over the comments on my post and reworking it based on the suggestions and critiques from my peers, I now have a better concept of how to improve my writing in the future and learn more about what I'm writing about. It also provided me more time to do extensive research on media ethics because there wasn't anything I needed to modify about the post; I simply needed a deeper understanding of what I was researching and writing about.

I also had to make it for educational purposes, namely to explain what the medium is and where the message originated from. So, as one of my peers suggested, I went into more depth after the first paragraph, which improved the overall enjoyment of the blog.

So this is my final review experience and I think it was my best one so far since I got the personal feedback from Irene and that really helped me improve the writing and it made me add where I got the information from by adding the source links so other people could read them also. 

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Media Ethics

Image
  WEEK 6 VIDEO TASK After watching all the videos for week 6 on Media ethics. I have gathered some thoughts about how each video really relate to the media ethics. One of the main thoughts that i was thinking of whilst i was engaging in all the videos was the idea of how especially in the first video how he is explaining about how the medium is the message, one of the thoughts i gathered from that is how one portrays/represents the message they are giving really has a significant impact on the person you are messaging. The mediums have a far greater impact on the fundamental shape and nature of society than any message that is delivered through that medium. In the second video there was many thoughts that i gathered whilst watching the video. How to this day Dr Aleksandr Kogan still believes what he did was just and legal and he believe because he had a close working relationship with Facebook he had the right to obtain data from over 87 million profiles on Facebook....
Read more
Image
 This photo was taken in ISO800 f/9 1/1250 s this photo was based on the vertical lines of the tree and the line of the paths 
Read more

Media Representation Week 10 Video Task

  Media Representation Week 10 Video Task After watching and analyzing all the videos for the week 10 video task. the idea behind all the videos and information I've gathered is that we examined the ethics of Media and the potential implications For Society, looking particular of representation in media. First Video In the first video It is a series of people explaining why representation matters and how it effects everyone. I learned it was a way i which people evaluate others in what they look like or what they love to do. There are multiple things that need to be represented such as the people or the culture in which the people grew up in which is severely important. And it is important that people can feel like they can watch the content and resign ate with it. I liked the quote " people who can not be represented can not be remembered " was one of the groups mottos so now they try to portray different people with different cultures just so more people could resign at...
Read more